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Adrift - Writing Assessment

Updated: Apr 13, 2019


Key Stage 2 have enjoyed writing the story ‘Adrift.’ 


Floating through the atmosphere, a whale carries a lonely girl on his back. She begins to think that she’ll always be alone, until one day she unexpectedly meets a boy. Is this her chance at friendship at last? 


Here is a selection of writing pieces demonstrating the expected standard in each year group:


Year 3




Year 4






Year 5






Year 6






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